From 0374f63a5ad87274acf26067047761845bcdf956 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Neil Brown Date: Fri, 1 Aug 2025 14:37:42 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typo and clarify general authorisation point --- sample_data_processing_terms.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/sample_data_processing_terms.md b/sample_data_processing_terms.md index 5c3a287..2edabb2 100644 --- a/sample_data_processing_terms.md +++ b/sample_data_processing_terms.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Terms which are defined in the UK GDPR, and which are not defined in the [terms These data processing terms supplement, and are subject to, the [terms for registered users of fedi.example.com]. -If, under Data Protection Legislation, you are the controller of the processing of personal data and we are carry out one or more processing activities on your behalf as your processor, these data processing terms apply in respect of those processing activities. +If, under Data Protection Legislation, you are the controller of the processing of personal data and we carry out one or more processing activities on your behalf as your processor, these data processing terms apply in respect of those processing activities. These data processing terms do not apply when we are a controller in respect of a processing activity. In respect of *those* processing activities, please see our privacy notice. @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ You must do all of the following: * Ensure that any instructions that you give to us with respect to the processing of personal data are lawful and will not cause us, or you, to breach any law. -* Give us your general authorisation to appoint Sub-processors. It is not viable for us to provide the Service and act as your processor without your general authorisation to appoint Sub-processors so, if you wish to withdraw your general authorisation, you can, but you must delete all personal data from the Service, so that we cease to be your processor. +* Give us your general authorisation to appoint Sub-processors. This means permitting us to appoint Sub-processors without getting your prior approval. It is not viable for us to provide the Service and act as your processor without your general authorisation to appoint Sub-processors so, if you wish to withdraw your general authorisation, you can, but you must delete all personal data from the Service, so that we cease to be your processor. * If you ask us to do one or more things which these data processing terms say that we will only do if you pay our charges, you must pay our charges for doing those things, since these are not part of the free Service. We may ask you to pay our charges in advance. If we do not receive payment in full, you agree that we are not obliged to do the things that you request.